Nice work, I'm way too tired to give a proper long review, but for a first attempt this was pretty impressive! Some things I would say could be tweaked, like the dialogue box could be a bit more stylish considering how good the rest looks. The choices also obviously should be more than a coinflip when you do a longer game, but makes sense for a short project like this. The dialogue was charming and fairly well written, and although a bit cliche of course, it was pretty convincing. It's hard to strike the balance between believability and convenience for a thing like this (especially since most of your audience, not to be rude, will likely not understand that sometimes bar flings can go even faster and more outlandish than this.) but this game pulled it off pretty well.
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Did any body got 1st CG?
Great story and the music is also amazing
Played, I choose i am still nerd, she didn't approve of it, I got my heart broken, uninstalled.
LMAO
Will you make a sequel or another visual novel? I really enjoyed this one!
I loved it i would like to see more from you people at sharkhound
great short game :)
Nice work, I'm way too tired to give a proper long review, but for a first attempt this was pretty impressive! Some things I would say could be tweaked, like the dialogue box could be a bit more stylish considering how good the rest looks. The choices also obviously should be more than a coinflip when you do a longer game, but makes sense for a short project like this. The dialogue was charming and fairly well written, and although a bit cliche of course, it was pretty convincing. It's hard to strike the balance between believability and convenience for a thing like this (especially since most of your audience, not to be rude, will likely not understand that sometimes bar flings can go even faster and more outlandish than this.) but this game pulled it off pretty well.
Thank you so much! This is our first go at it, but we have another visual novel in the works!